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Oh man, the art is so pretty!
I enjoyed the writing, the boom booms were lovely. I like the new priestess and the giant guy heh. I hope they become a cool friend trio.
"but none of this symptoms did go away" Shouldn't it be "these"?
"Blunted from grief and helpnesses..." Shouldn't it be helplessness?
"Or maybe it won't, at it will drag him into the underworld." Shouldn't it be "and" or "as" instead of "at"
You're right. I've just uploaded the corrected version of the game. The novel was but a smol project to test things out and I didn't hire a beta-reader, haha. Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you've liked it ^^
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Oh man, the art is so pretty!
I enjoyed the writing, the boom booms were lovely. I like the new priestess and the giant guy heh. I hope they become a cool friend trio.
"but none of this symptoms did go away" Shouldn't it be "these"?
"Blunted from grief and helpnesses..." Shouldn't it be helplessness?
"Or maybe it won't, at it will drag him into the underworld." Shouldn't it be "and" or "as" instead of "at"
You're right. I've just uploaded the corrected version of the game. The novel was but a smol project to test things out and I didn't hire a beta-reader, haha. Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you've liked it ^^